Monday, June 30, 2008

Dead Boys Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

The child sits and weeps,
How could this be all that matters,
Why did this have to hurt so deep,
How could this be life?
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Bethany Maxwell
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Tamara - Hanaring 14 September 2009

oh that is so touching and sad..and you know how to dive deeply in others's emotions...may be for that you felt my poem watchful eyes guarding you.as your heart too is guarding children's souls....excellent

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Bryan Alexander 14 September 2009

a sad story but a great poem

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WOW....that was so nicley written! ! ! Good Job! Keep It Up! ! !

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Bethany Maxwell

Bethany Maxwell

some where in this universe muhahaha
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