…dead Body Walking… Comments

You set there smiling in my face Acting as if you know me well While you know nothing about me Or what I have been throw Do you know how many nights I cried? well done... its really an inspiring poem..amazed to know that you are doing good poetry.. proved you are doing good... the same way i also rote a poem but enough different..appreciate your poem 10+++++++++

Time keeps changing. It will be on your side one day and you will be alive again. One should not loose hope.

Human mind is wonderful that is the award of the lord, to imagine so many levels, a very good vision of loss and agony i found in it, but all should change emotions, joy, sad etc. nothing cant stay still times may differ. good poem. thanks for sharing.

Sad writing, but written well. Keep writing and expressing clear thoughts. Thank you.