Wednesday, December 16, 2009

Dead Bodies Comments

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It’s deep to see,
A lifeless body,
Whose headless body has a fountain of blood gushing out of it.
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David Oluwatobi Akinola
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Anonymous Anonymous 02 February 2010

It's deep to see, and I don't pray to see. well expressed, good job.

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Chigemezi Nnadozie Wogu 04 January 2010

you've got some talents, don't know what inspired you to write but I saw the flow in the message from either war or violence

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Muhammad Shanazar 18 December 2009

The poem is brief but contains in itself the whole human history, millions and millions of men and women have been killed in the wars and no issue has been resolved yet. It is the duty of all poets to make aware that a single dropp of human blood possesses more worth than all treasures that the Earth contains. Regards Shanazar

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David Oluwatobi Akinola

David Oluwatobi Akinola

Zaria, Kaduna State-Nigeria
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