It’s deep to see,
A lifeless body,
Whose headless body has a fountain of blood gushing out of it.
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you've got some talents, don't know what inspired you to write but I saw the flow in the message from either war or violence
The poem is brief but contains in itself the whole human history, millions and millions of men and women have been killed in the wars and no issue has been resolved yet. It is the duty of all poets to make aware that a single dropp of human blood possesses more worth than all treasures that the Earth contains. Regards Shanazar
It's deep to see, and I don't pray to see. well expressed, good job.