Thursday, January 21, 2016

Dead At Thirteen Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dead at thirteen,
another case of lead poisoning.
A stray bullet to the chest,
for some idiotic thing at best.
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Elena Plotkin
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Bri Edwards 10 May 2017

Thanks for guns in topics section. At times I really thought you might have been talking about lead paint chips. Well, the victim may really have not been great nor the family happy, but STILL a life is a life; someone should have to pay a penalty for the crime! Well done. To MyPoemList. Bri :)

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Sandra Feldman 22 January 2016

Great poem, very poignant. Against blind violence. Life is sacred, man has not learned to respect it. Good work, from good poetic heart.

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