Thursday, September 5, 2013

Dead Are My People Comments

Rating: 3.5

Gone are my people, but I exist yet,
Lamenting them in my solitude...
Dead are my friends, and in their Death my life is naught but great
Disaster.
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Alec Tong 01 October 2023

Even if my people died, I don't give a . I just try to live the present, and that's what you should do.

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Bri Edwards 01 October 2023

I liked the poem as a fine 'production', ...but I doubt he was sincere in writing these words: 'in their Death my life is naught but great Disaster.. bri Edwards : )

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Bri Edwards 01 October 2023

I may have 'lost' the comment I was finishing. WHERE did it go! ? I did not feel the poem (for me) was 'heartbreaking', sad, OR heart warming, as some commenters did & don't know if Gibran's poem saved any lives; it may have caused some readers to be more 'charitable'..

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Bri Edwards 01 October 2023

I only read the poem once but it seemed to imply that the U.S. & others could have/should have prevented or lessened the loss of life.

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Bri Edwards 01 October 2023

He lived much of his life in the U.S., enjoying comforts many of those in Syria did not have due to famine.

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Bri Edwards 01 October 2023

Gibran had serious health problems & 'heavy drinking' seems to have led to cirrhosis, leading to his death. A famine in his native land led to widespread starvation, blamed by some on the 'Turkish government I believe I read.

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Bri Edwards 01 October 2023

I read the poem & read extensively in a Wikipedia article about Gibran's life. He wrote in English & Arabic, died at age 48, and was known for his artwork/drawings & paintings as well as poetry & other writings.

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souriya will survive 19 October 2021

I am a Syrian living in the West, watching hopelessly the death of my people. I read this poem almost every day, and cry every time. Gibran put beautifully in words, the pain and the guilt of seeing our people dying while living comfortably. It is probably the most wonderful poem ever written

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Rajnish Manga 05 June 2018

My people died a painful and shameful Death..... Birds with broken wings Dying for / Freedom is nobler than living in The shadow of weak submission... senility..... //.... The lines I have quoted underline the plight and irony of an oppressed people. The concluding lines call upon all men and women to help out others in difficult situations and be worthy of God's bliss. Thanks.

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Susan Williams 04 June 2018

There are many tragedies in this world in our lives but I would not want this kind of burden on my soul- I don't think I could ever again have a happy day when my people are suffering in torment... it must be awful for God as well

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Robert Murray Smith 04 June 2018

A poignant write that shows the plight.

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Britte Ninad 04 June 2018

the greatest humanitarian note and word- My people denotes the humanity the heart of poet is crying for those people who are on the way of meaningless death great writing

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 June 2018

Such a great poem by Khalil Gibran👍👍👍

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 September 2017

few would care to witness this Drama, for my people are as birds with Broken wings, left behind the flock. Wow, great poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 April 2017

.I am here beyond the Broad seas living in the shadow of Tranquillity, and in the sunshine of Peace... A heart rending poem by Khalil Gibran that touches the soul.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 April 2017

birds with broken wings left behind by the flock A great tragic narrative, and very touching too.

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Savita Tyagi 20 April 2017

A sad and heartbreaking account of what war does and how helpless the people feel even when their own lives are spare by luck. Suffering by association leaves a deep impact.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 April 2017

Lamentations! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2017

Light of the sun.... thanks for posting.....

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Kelly Pittman 31 August 2015

this is so heart warming

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