Sunday, September 7, 2008

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Every time i hear your voice
Make me forget about every other noise

Every lonely day and every silent night
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Edgar Alvarez
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Greenwolfe 1962 09 September 2008

This is not written or organized very well. The structure may need some work as well.I cannot recommend it. GW62

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