Sunday, December 10, 2017

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I check my pulse to see if I'm still alive,
I crawl back to my room and fall into my bed
letting everything out.
I lay back
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Khushi Batra
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Pallab Chaudhury 10 December 2017

...very emotionally driven and well penned. I liked the presentation. Very nice start.... With best wishes.

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Stacy 10 December 2017

wow! the emotions are depicted so well, keep writing xx

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