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Beautiful love song, it sounds music in just its lyrics. But a request, which i got as advice from my friends, try to use complete words, right from the title. It will give the reader a better start in his mind.

Conjunction of rhythm, emotion and diction.... Ur poetic art is getting better and better in this kind of love poems. Dont write anything else. Only love poetry.....

Emotion, words, everything is perfect in this wonderful poem. A heartful of thanks for writing this. God bless U..keep writing: -)

i compleatly love it! !

Wonderful words that are loaded with love. Well done my friend! 10/10

Nothing like that warm spot in the heart.

A poem that speaks out the inner feelings from the bottom of the heart.

A young girls dreams exposed to other eyes presented in poetic prose

Thank you for sharing a young girls dream

good read, heartfelt love poem, thanks for sharing

Desire is the food for the heart.You got it right Tanvi. Brett

“Even though now we're miles apart, you're the one who still has my heart.” Words of the heart of her who is so in-love… this is the way it is… nice! Well said dear…

Very nice poem Tanvi... well narrated with good rhythm... :)

a sweet poem..............

Desire of the heart or love gone astray? How many times is the desire or heart mentioned in the body of your work? Maybe another title?

This is a poem full of reality, romance, feelings, attachment, magnetism and portrays the contents very well.the flow is smooth and the rhythm is musical...good one

This is a poem full of reality, romance, feelings, attachment, magnetism and portrays the contents very well.the flow is smooth and the rhythm is musical...good one

This is a poem full of reality, romance, feelings, attachment, magnetism and portrays the contents very well.the flow is smooth and the rhythm is musical...good one

Oh! so romantic..I see good memories here...Good Work :) Merna

Very nice Tanvi, well done. David