Monday, January 18, 2010

De$! Re$ Of The He@rt Comments

Rating: 3.7

Do you remember,
how it was when we were still together?
How we used to in the rain dance,
and dream of going to England and France?
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tanvi damle
COMMENTS
Aman Sa 21 March 2012

Beautiful love song, it sounds music in just its lyrics. But a request, which i got as advice from my friends, try to use complete words, right from the title. It will give the reader a better start in his mind.

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 24 January 2010

Conjunction of rhythm, emotion and diction.... Ur poetic art is getting better and better in this kind of love poems. Dont write anything else. Only love poetry.....

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 22 January 2010

Emotion, words, everything is perfect in this wonderful poem. A heartful of thanks for writing this. God bless U..keep writing: -)

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Darlene Styles 22 January 2010

i compleatly love it! !

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Wonderful words that are loaded with love. Well done my friend! 10/10

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Joseph Poewhit 21 January 2010

Nothing like that warm spot in the heart.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 19 January 2010

A poem that speaks out the inner feelings from the bottom of the heart.

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Ivor Hogg 19 January 2010

A young girls dreams exposed to other eyes presented in poetic prose

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Tom Golding 19 January 2010

Thank you for sharing a young girls dream

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 19 January 2010

good read, heartfelt love poem, thanks for sharing

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 January 2010

Desire is the food for the heart.You got it right Tanvi. Brett

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Aira Olayvar 18 January 2010

“Even though now we're miles apart, you're the one who still has my heart.” Words of the heart of her who is so in-love… this is the way it is… nice! Well said dear…

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Sumita Datta 18 January 2010

Very nice poem Tanvi... well narrated with good rhythm... :)

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a sweet poem..............

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Luke Easter 18 January 2010

Desire of the heart or love gone astray? How many times is the desire or heart mentioned in the body of your work? Maybe another title?

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Nikunj Sharma 18 January 2010

This is a poem full of reality, romance, feelings, attachment, magnetism and portrays the contents very well.the flow is smooth and the rhythm is musical...good one

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Nikunj Sharma 18 January 2010

This is a poem full of reality, romance, feelings, attachment, magnetism and portrays the contents very well.the flow is smooth and the rhythm is musical...good one

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Nikunj Sharma 18 January 2010

This is a poem full of reality, romance, feelings, attachment, magnetism and portrays the contents very well.the flow is smooth and the rhythm is musical...good one

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Merna Ibrahim 18 January 2010

Oh! so romantic..I see good memories here...Good Work :) Merna

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David Mountain 18 January 2010

Very nice Tanvi, well done. David

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