Do you remember,
how it was when we were still together?
How we used to in the rain dance,
and dream of going to England and France?
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Conjunction of rhythm, emotion and diction.... Ur poetic art is getting better and better in this kind of love poems. Dont write anything else. Only love poetry.....
Emotion, words, everything is perfect in this wonderful poem. A heartful of thanks for writing this. God bless U..keep writing: -)
Wonderful words that are loaded with love. Well done my friend! 10/10
A poem that speaks out the inner feelings from the bottom of the heart.
A young girls dreams exposed to other eyes presented in poetic prose
Desire is the food for the heart.You got it right Tanvi. Brett
“Even though now we're miles apart, you're the one who still has my heart.” Words of the heart of her who is so in-love… this is the way it is… nice! Well said dear…
Desire of the heart or love gone astray? How many times is the desire or heart mentioned in the body of your work? Maybe another title?
This is a poem full of reality, romance, feelings, attachment, magnetism and portrays the contents very well.the flow is smooth and the rhythm is musical...good one
This is a poem full of reality, romance, feelings, attachment, magnetism and portrays the contents very well.the flow is smooth and the rhythm is musical...good one
This is a poem full of reality, romance, feelings, attachment, magnetism and portrays the contents very well.the flow is smooth and the rhythm is musical...good one
Oh! so romantic..I see good memories here...Good Work :) Merna
Beautiful love song, it sounds music in just its lyrics. But a request, which i got as advice from my friends, try to use complete words, right from the title. It will give the reader a better start in his mind.