Nervously I felt the overview humor
of your dazzling heart,
was whispering with a soft note on my ear,
'Blue blue open your door I am there'...
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touched my soul and illustrated my heart Like a fairy-tale of overwhelmed imagery grasped me, Revisited your poem like this poem remembered me. Your poems can put illusory nets on the hearts of a reader, mesmerize and make it its own. Great skill dear poetess. Please keep writing, don't allow your emotions to spill into the unknown zones of eternal void. Don't mind if I get personal, Regards. Subhas
Nice poem.. I felt the footsteps of your dreamy flies, Wistfully adorn the path of heavenly rise- exquisite imagery..10++
A very romantic drop! ! One should not miss sipping potion of love if one gets it. The flow is amazing. Thanks for sharing.
Dreaming of a dazzling heart, mesmerized eyes and the blue hug overwhelms the beauty of your passionate poem..really entertaining...full 10 marks to you..
Loved these lines: I buzzed, Buzzed into the silence of reminisced twitter. Am entwined with the classic fragrance of crimson light, kissed my dreams and hugged them tight. Best wishes and happy writing!
what a romantic dream......filling your sub-conscious mind with ecstasy....but then reality can't be far away....it is to be discovered by you......lovely lines of yours making the poem lively...
I think dreams come from our inner heart to cherish our goal we deserve and design a path to reach into the reality.The smell of budding mind could enrich the garden of soul.....Thank you once again my dear friend.
It was all dreaming, dreaming of your enlightened write! touched my soul and illustrated my heart Like a fairy-tale of overwhelmed imagery..........Dear poetess, you have the great ability to imagine and you play with words....... hope you will write everyday more and more and publish here. thank you very much. tony
Thank you so much dear poet for your great thinking about myself. I would try my best to take a break from busy life and share the sheds here.Thank you and best wishes.
Like a fairy-tale of overwhelmed imagery grasped me, grasped me suddenly by its all contemporary. Well written Nilima.
Beautiful poem......thanks ❤
thank you dear poet