[fireworks in the sky]
the plain white stars
hide and disappear
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An indelible spark of philosophy dazzling the mind with its glow...manmade creations are transitory in nature and come with a price tag where as celestial wonders are permanent and priceless...well done
Ronald Peat has a point, but I disagree. Most poets see things that other folks don't see or can even imagine. In my poem The Old Red Barn I make a statement that the old red barn seemed to be weeping that day, however we know in reality that a barn cannot weep no more that the stars can see your fireworks but we as poets can see these things. I have many other poems that use these metaphors such as my poem A Tree where the bluebirds are building a nest in her hair (leaves) . We all know that a tree dose not have hair. So keep on dreaming and writing, that's what we as poets do. God bless, your friend Lynn
spoken like a poet, dear friend... celebratory fireworks of nations and military displays of regimes never impressed me as the wonders of a lone distant star in the quiet sky
Yes, it's so amazing Sam, work of art or man made...too expensive and will only last for a while. nothing last better than God-given wonders! very nice! :)
sky shots are really awesome and wonderful to look at, they are really too costly and does not even last for a fraction of their cost, very nice poem..
They last only half their cost, other half goes to profits.... Nice poem...keep it up
A philosophical poem Sam, very enjoyable to read, thanks, 10 Lynda xx
as the dazzling star spark up in the heaven above....the sky light have made our thought so bright......it’s the heart that say the beautiful you in the sky….. thank you for sharing....you have a poem that hold every breathe high like a shinning star in the Sky....God bless...a 10 +++++ stars
as the dazzling star spark up in the heaven above....the sky light have made our thought so bright......it’s the heart that say the beautiful you in the sky….. thank you for sharing....you have a poem that hold every breathe high like a shinning star in the Sky....God bless...a 10 +++++ stars
wonderful philosophical poem, deep ideas well embedded to convey the message, lovcely to read..10+++++++++++
'Kaasai kari aakkaade'....what our elders say at home, , , , you have nicely transformed it to a poem...I AM JUST MAN MADE... I ONLY LAST MY COST.....that is simply wonderful.....thank you
'Kaasai kari aakkaade'....what our elders say at home, , , , you have nicely transformed it to a poem...I AM JUST MAN MADE... I ONLY LAST MY COST.....that is simply wonderful.....thank you
its a colourfull poem....the intense feeling of god made and man made is portrayed weel in this poem....good write 10+
An excellent pensive piece laced with wit and satire. A perfect 10.
Sam, It is a contemplative poem on the Festival of lights. Man goes by dazzle, not by glow, Hence, he always falls flat low. CP
very nice.........and magical....x