Friday, October 16, 2009

# # Dazzling Colors In The Sky -Diwali Comments

Rating: 4.1

[fireworks in the sky]

the plain white stars
hide and disappear
...
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Mangla Shanker 01 November 2009

very nice.........and magical....x

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Chitra - 31 October 2009

An indelible spark of philosophy dazzling the mind with its glow...manmade creations are transitory in nature and come with a price tag where as celestial wonders are permanent and priceless...well done

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Sandhya S N 29 October 2009

very intersting poem truth too regards sandhya

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Eyan Desir 27 October 2009

Interesting poem I still trying to understand your veiw point

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Lynn Glover 26 October 2009

Ronald Peat has a point, but I disagree. Most poets see things that other folks don't see or can even imagine. In my poem The Old Red Barn I make a statement that the old red barn seemed to be weeping that day, however we know in reality that a barn cannot weep no more that the stars can see your fireworks but we as poets can see these things. I have many other poems that use these metaphors such as my poem A Tree where the bluebirds are building a nest in her hair (leaves) . We all know that a tree dose not have hair. So keep on dreaming and writing, that's what we as poets do. God bless, your friend Lynn

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Raj Arumugam 23 October 2009

spoken like a poet, dear friend... celebratory fireworks of nations and military displays of regimes never impressed me as the wonders of a lone distant star in the quiet sky

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Smiley Hooker 23 October 2009

Yes, it's so amazing Sam, work of art or man made...too expensive and will only last for a while. nothing last better than God-given wonders! very nice! :)

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 23 October 2009

sky shots are really awesome and wonderful to look at, they are really too costly and does not even last for a fraction of their cost, very nice poem..

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Nikunj Sharma 21 October 2009

They last only half their cost, other half goes to profits.... Nice poem...keep it up

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Lynda Robson 21 October 2009

A philosophical poem Sam, very enjoyable to read, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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Indira Babbellapati 21 October 2009

somehow these fireworks cease to amuse me any more...

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Antonio Liao 20 October 2009

as the dazzling star spark up in the heaven above....the sky light have made our thought so bright......it’s the heart that say the beautiful you in the sky….. thank you for sharing....you have a poem that hold every breathe high like a shinning star in the Sky....God bless...a 10 +++++ stars

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Antonio Liao 20 October 2009

as the dazzling star spark up in the heaven above....the sky light have made our thought so bright......it’s the heart that say the beautiful you in the sky….. thank you for sharing....you have a poem that hold every breathe high like a shinning star in the Sky....God bless...a 10 +++++ stars

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Marieta Maglas 20 October 2009

wonderful philosophical poem, deep ideas well embedded to convey the message, lovcely to read..10+++++++++++

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Indira Renganathan 20 October 2009

'Kaasai kari aakkaade'....what our elders say at home, , , , you have nicely transformed it to a poem...I AM JUST MAN MADE... I ONLY LAST MY COST.....that is simply wonderful.....thank you

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Indira Renganathan 20 October 2009

'Kaasai kari aakkaade'....what our elders say at home, , , , you have nicely transformed it to a poem...I AM JUST MAN MADE... I ONLY LAST MY COST.....that is simply wonderful.....thank you

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Elsee Daniel 20 October 2009

its a colourfull poem....the intense feeling of god made and man made is portrayed weel in this poem....good write 10+

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Vaibhav Pandey 20 October 2009

a different take on diwali..very philosophical indeed..10

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Anand Madhukar 19 October 2009

An excellent pensive piece laced with wit and satire. A perfect 10.

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C. P. Sharma 19 October 2009

Sam, It is a contemplative poem on the Festival of lights. Man goes by dazzle, not by glow, Hence, he always falls flat low. CP

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