Sunday, June 1, 2014
Dazzling Children Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Over the soft warm islands
of the South Pacific,
the sun traced its daily journey
until MAUI shook his fat finger
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Noreen Carden
09 June 2014
I agree with Marie you craft your poem and draw the reader in as you weave a magical journey as with this poem beginning in the South Pacific and on to Jerusalem. Really beautiful as always Daniel.
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