Daystar's Home Comments

This is very inspiring indeed for everybody has a place to reside, to rest even for the sun and stars in cosmos that is of course a mystery yet all go within a home found for soulful rest.....very well scripted 10+++

We find out the peaceful home we run and run after the peaceful spot We wanna buy cosmic beauty with us forever We wanna residential place must be divine wherever we go But it's difficult if we do not work according to our desire

Go, my spirit, and take wing to this land It is not as far as you imagine. Fly until on its very courts you stand And utter the cry that was kept within. .......the spot, the world is this spirit, self spirit or soul; if the self soul feels peace, if the self soul does anything welfare for the whole world then this soul or spirit finds out the peace, ever peaceful world; congrats for being selected thrice this beautiful poem as POD

'I know it is somewhere in time and space, Perhaps still keeping itself from our view Until it finally unfolds in place To be specially seen by me and you' - Let's hope we can see that place someday! A poem that rhymes well, a thing of my liking. Congratulations on being selected the 'Member Poem of the Day', year after year on the same day!

A beautiful reminder for one to enjoy every possible thing about life. For there is always light. Thank You

This is a lovely, well-written poem.

Is there a world where my heart can find peace Because light appears in every corner? Where is this cosmos the day does not cease Nor hide even once, nor set to slumber? i want peace, is there a world where i can find peace. we all search or peace in this world. tony

For I heard that dawn is ever waking There in its horizon, its glorious spheres And the morning dew is always taking Away the memories causing our fears. Go, my spirit, and take wing to this land It is not as far as you imagine. Fly until on its very courts you stand And utter the cry that was kept within.- - -A lovely poem with great depth. Congratulations for being selected the Poem of the Day!

" Where is the Cosmos where the day does'nt cease" Great conceptualization. Well deserved poem of the day. Congrats.

Exhortative poem about an engagement with life! Powerful sense that light is ceaseless and the poet needs to find a shady dreamy place to rest and feel calm.

Ah after a long time I have seen a Poem Of the Day that is a poem per se. And lovely to add. Congratulations dear poet

More to learn! ! ! Living and Learning always. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Wow Obed, felt like going through the great psychiatrist Fr Brian Weiss' books..you have got a depth of metaphysical knowledge. Beautiful poem. Congratulations for being picked as the member poem of the day. 10+++±

keen observer and brilliantly penned

Eight quatrains and all with end rhymes and that for such a young poet. Daystar´s Home is captivating and an impressing read. Brilliantly created, Obed. How can it be, last year (as I have noticed that) this poem was chosen too as Member Poem Of The Day, exactly on the same date? This is true wonderful. Congratulations! A 10 plus plus

Beautiful poem! Absolutely inspiring...

Lovely to read a positive poem in a classic form with theme that expands into the cosmos...

I like the poem very much and think it would benefit from dropping the last stanza

Because I believe there is more to learn Of this residence, this sanctuary. It is a temple where I always yearn To walk on and find out its mystery. sanctuary and mystery........ you have special power of observation...... very nice poem..tony

Heartwarming poem...... Congrats for being picked twice.... A perfect vote++++++++++++++++++++