Days That Have Gone Comments

Lovely. Makes me yearn for those childhood days, too. As soon as I read this poem, what came to my mind was a song sung by Jagjit Singh and Chitra Singh - that has 'woh kagaz ki kashti woh baarish ka paani' (that translates as: those paper boats, those raindrops)

I liked your poem....Very good

i wish! good write dear

Baidurya, this is beautiful. Don't we all wish we could relive our yesterdays, good times and bad as they come. Great poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David