Feeble sounds of timeless tunes
Flowing from across the dunes
Heard, unheard….in disbelief
I stood there…felt a strange relief
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This is an excellent poem, mingling bare winter with shattered dreams.A 10.
Another sweet composition, bringing out your love of life! -Raj
Ammmazing composition seema! No waste of words and thoughtfull........10
good write...optimism holding out...the phrase 'winter's last leaf' is enjoyably noticeable...well done, Seema 10
Faith held…like winters last leaf! - a wonderful line suggesting your poetical tongue.keep it up