Monday, September 15, 2008

***days Of 'Fall'*** Comments

Rating: 2.8

Feeble sounds of timeless tunes
Flowing from across the dunes
Heard, unheard….in disbelief
I stood there…felt a strange relief
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 22 September 2008

Faith held…like winters last leaf! - a wonderful line suggesting your poetical tongue.keep it up

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 September 2008

Amazing composition, lovely. Enjoyed and added 10.

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Koyel Mitra 16 September 2008

This is an excellent poem, mingling bare winter with shattered dreams.A 10.

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Raj Nandy 16 September 2008

Another sweet composition, bringing out your love of life! -Raj

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 September 2008

Ammmazing composition seema! No waste of words and thoughtfull........10

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Kesav Easwaran 15 September 2008

good write...optimism holding out...the phrase 'winter's last leaf' is enjoyably noticeable...well done, Seema 10

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Seema Aarella

Seema Aarella

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