Taken with the tides, and rushed
away to sea, with clouds of darkness
shadowing behind, was what has
been left like the remains
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Days of darkness over...but the real brightness of life lost and left behind...strong poem expressive, beautifully presented...ten for this, Bonnie
Bonnie, So eloquently quilled with your 'magic ink'... 'Days of Darkness' rocks the house! Write on friend, write on! ! Be safe, Robert
I love this poem Bonnie. You paint a rich contrast of loss with the hope of a new beginning. Wonderful poem. Love, Andrew x
A beautifully written piece of emotion..As heart rendering as it was to read, you expressed these feelings with such believability that its leaves the reader wanting to read on. Great poem 10/10 best wishes Jon
A very sad piece. Enjoyed it though. Thanks for sharing. Craig.
I have felt that unrestrained, passionate love of my youth and i have felt the love of my offspring its a delicate balance, there is no choice we have loved, lost, and won again!