Thursday, December 15, 2005

Days Of Confusion Comments

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Days of confusion,
have you always thinking of the wrong conclutions
dont even know who your accusion
dont have the trust
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Robert Araya
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Daniel Tyler 10 April 2006

Yes, I liked the energy here and the rhyming is effectively used. from reading your work, I sense you have a lot of natural rhythm because the bounce of the phrasing, as I call it, is very strong and assertive. Most impressive.

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