Sunday, February 22, 2009

Days Never Last Comments

Rating: 4.2

Often I think
About you
When the feelings of love
Come over above
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akram saqib
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Jack Price 31 March 2009

Great Poem, very moving! a joy to read!

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Aasma Rehan 16 March 2009

Goodness Saqib you are superb.You don't need my comments specially this poem.It is marvelous.

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 02 March 2009

It is a nice rhythm and flow. Easy to read and pleasant. Sentimental also. I like.

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Aijaz Asif 02 March 2009

hello baloch! thanks for the comment..... your poems are extremely good and poignant write indeed with nice rhythmic flows which felts like a water fall...keep it up with the great work....10+++ rgds asif

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Chitra - 01 March 2009

your emotions drift across the page and straihgt into the heart..poignant write

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Catrina Heart 24 February 2009

Rhymes fantastically, printed in eloquence..10

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ata khan 22 February 2009

zabardast! ! ! great flow Thanks for sharing

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