Days In The Shade Comments

.....its flows smoothly like silk........this poem is adorned with some beautiful lines in there, , , , , , ...........I'm in a landlocked phase, With inward uncertainty, in a settled haze, , , , , , , , , , , , , lovely write Hazel.............a 10! .

Beautiful...it seems like I'm flowing with the tides when reading this one. Perfect rhythm. Truly superb.

You write like waves sweeping on the beach face...so beautiful and resonating_Soul

I'm in a landlocked phase, With inward uncertainty, in a settled haze, Living in a stagnant ebb, Like I'm immersed in a complex web, Some of the great lines in the poem! I enjoyed the whole! !

A lovely write as always Hazel, a very enjoyable read.

in you poem you describe the days in the shade very nicely. sensitive.

These melancholic lines have a charm and when you write down pessimistic notes at times, I think of telling you that your poetic status has an optimistic phase. Your perceptions and auto suggestions have a deep connection and they both help you write fine poetry. Thanks for sharing Hazel.

after reading this i like to address the Hon'ble Poetess as Tragedy Queen of poetry.

sweet melancholy/great write! ! ! !

You always write beautifully crafted lyric poetry. There's always a tinge of sadness or little melancholy. It must be your sweet Irish heritage. I too am in a land locked phase wishing to be near the sea. Great Poem 10/10 BB

Good poem. Well written.

Good poem...Well written.

love is complete whole, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.