Sunday, September 24, 2006

Days End Comments

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here i am again...trying to hold back tears,
was busy all day and not thinking,
but now at day's end my head is hung,
it goes down as the sun is sinking,
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Vallerie Lobell
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 30 April 2009

this poem is truly remarkable..u amazing!

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Rasheed Alqahas 29 September 2006

you are not alone, i feel how you are sad, but what you say when your sons grew up and leaving you, my sons grew up, they left our big home, they became parents, i wrote a poem about, you can read after few hours, so the life is this: carry us from place to place.God bless your son.

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Diane Violet 26 September 2006

Thank God you cannot lose them twice Vallerie. My neice wrote a poem titled 'Day's End', it was a poem for her father and her grandfather. Happily her father is still here with us but her grandfather, my father didn't win the battle with cancer. I'll have to post it and you can check it out if you want to. Take care, Diane

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