Days And Years Comments

days..years..old house..old lady..seasons..colours..school bus.. simple words, easy memories, time flies, taking us.. we realise, only when we dont find ourslvs.. good wrk cherry.. loved it..

Cherry A retracing to your child hood where you can see an old house that you have not seen for years and an old lady (young at that time) with a catching smile offering bread and butter…….. Every one will have such good old memories to fondle in our old age. A great work….Nice… Further, I appreciate the way you put it together, so simply… so that a normal reader will not bypass….and they can go thru without help of a Dictionary.

only if i had thoughts like you do great imagery good work

a very very good piece. nie writing

i love this poem....... memories linking back to the present day... thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***