Thursday, September 4, 2008

Days And Nights Comments

Rating: 2.6

I always seemed to wonder
If you could love my blunders
and take me in just how I came to be.
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Heather Milks
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Francesca Martin 14 September 2008

honest and hopeful. very heart-felt poem. great job

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Blue Eyes 05 September 2008

waw, i love this poem it is the fruit of a heart its the true feeling of a person thaa gone through the mintioned experience.its really great

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Angelique' Rockwell 05 September 2008

I sorta agree with ted...not so much a poem but i could definately hear some music flowing with it. Beautiful, thanx for sharing...

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Colin Jeffery 04 September 2008

Great poem from a great poet

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Rajinder Singh 04 September 2008

Lovely poem.Keep writing.Dont let people discourage you

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Ted Sheridan 04 September 2008

A lousy poem but not a bad song. Gave it a ten for the song value. I could hear it. A little too cliche but with a tweak here and a tweak there you may have a winner.

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Heather Milks

Heather Milks

Portland Oregon
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