Saturday, January 30, 2010

Days And Minutes Comments

Rating: 3.2

Counting the days to past
Until I forgotten, at last
The pain which is still fresh
Hurting me ravagely, flesh to flesh
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Sheldon Allen Saluta
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Juvela Obi 15 February 2010

this is intriguing. I don't know the exact meaning of the poem, but I can definitely sense the emotions in it. well written, if you write with the same goals I do.8/10

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Whisperkwane Lamb 11 February 2010

what is a promise...but a misconception of the one at the other end...reminders are sometimes painful...but be glad...not sad...understanding is a wise tool...

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