Friday, January 3, 2003

Days Comments

Rating: 3.3

Some days my thoughts are just cocoons- all cold, and dull and blind,
They hang from dripping branches in the grey woods of my mind;

And other days they drift and shine - such free and flying things!
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Karle Wilson Baker
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Mahtab Bangalee 03 November 2019

Some days my thoughts are just cocoons- all cold, and dull and blind, They hang from dripping branches in the grey woods of my mind; // beautiful poetic expression

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Rajnish Manga 07 March 2018

Thoughts should always be like that- '....in the grey woods of.... mind.... I find the gold-dust in my hair, left by their brushing wings'. Exquisitely crafted poem. Thanks.

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Kevin Taylor 07 March 2018

Simple, very often best.

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Practicing Poetess 07 March 2018

A short poem with a pretty ending!

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 07 March 2018

What better way to express the way thoughts behave? Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing the lovely poem.x

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Damion Hamilton 07 March 2018

excellent vibrant, short little poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 March 2018

Days! ! With the muse of the mind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Glen Kappy 07 March 2018

Cool poem! My first time reading it. Baker uses what could be trite subject matter to make something fresh. Dripping branches in the grey woods of my mind—cool! -GK

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 07 March 2018

Simply fantastic and so brilliantly crafted............thanks for sharing

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 March 2018

Such a brilliant write by Karle Wilson Baker👍👍👍

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 March 2017

A beautifully conceived equally beautiful and meaningful sweet little poem.

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Indira Renganathan 07 March 2017

Human nature it is....sometimes with reason, sometimes without reasons.....good poem

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Seamus O Brian 07 March 2017

A vivid contrast of the complexity of thought. Efficiently rendered, yet colorfully articulated.

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Tom Allport 07 March 2017

a nice poem of contrasts? I suppose it depends on which side of the bed you got out of that day?

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 March 2017

My thoughts! Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 March 2017

Drift and shine..... thanks for sharing...,

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