Some days my thoughts are just cocoons- all cold, and dull and blind,
They hang from dripping branches in the grey woods of my mind;
And other days they drift and shine - such free and flying things!
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Thoughts should always be like that- '....in the grey woods of.... mind.... I find the gold-dust in my hair, left by their brushing wings'. Exquisitely crafted poem. Thanks.
What better way to express the way thoughts behave? Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing the lovely poem.x
Days! ! With the muse of the mind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Cool poem! My first time reading it. Baker uses what could be trite subject matter to make something fresh. Dripping branches in the grey woods of my mind—cool! -GK
Simply fantastic and so brilliantly crafted............thanks for sharing
A beautifully conceived equally beautiful and meaningful sweet little poem.
Human nature it is....sometimes with reason, sometimes without reasons.....good poem
A vivid contrast of the complexity of thought. Efficiently rendered, yet colorfully articulated.
a nice poem of contrasts? I suppose it depends on which side of the bed you got out of that day?
Some days my thoughts are just cocoons- all cold, and dull and blind, They hang from dripping branches in the grey woods of my mind; // beautiful poetic expression