Sunday, August 20, 2017

Daydreams. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Daydreamers build castles way up in the blue,
And fill them with pictures that are never quite true.
A castle in clouds is a secret retreat,
Where hope for the future and fond memories accrete.
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Jak Black
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Simone Inez Harriman 28 August 2017

Our dreams bring us a step closer to reality. A lovely poem that reminds us of the importance of holding on to our dreams and to share them with those we love.10+++

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Lorraine Colon 25 August 2017

What a lovely poem! Yes, dreams alter our reality, and provide a safety net for us when we sense we are about to fall into the dark pit of despair. Beautifully written, Jak.

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Dimitrios Galanis 22 August 2017

Dreams I will cling to, they help keep me sane, A parallel dimension, tucked away in my brain. Beautiful verses!

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Rini Shibu 20 August 2017

Lovely poem on day dream,10

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