Friday, April 3, 2009

Daydreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sit and stare at this here screen,
I want to write,
But i only dream.
My mind wanders out of this room,
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Holly Smith
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Irene Clark-hogg 25 July 2009

All poets dream, that is why they are poets. How good it is to share our dreams. This is a lovely descriptive piece. Irene

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Roshni D'Souza 25 April 2009

Beautiful imagery! Keep it up!

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Yassar Ali 13 April 2009

lovely poem keep up the good work

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Reece Lyle 10 April 2009

love this poem, its really inspirational, keep it up holly... cant wait to read what else you have writen

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White Tiger 09 April 2009

I really enjoyed this poem. Good imagination. Keep up the good writings, it only gets better.

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Holly Smith

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