Thursday, March 23, 2006

Daydreaming Comments

Rating: 5.0

A moon shines brightly
as butterflies dance with the wind
and I am nestled up to you
enjoying hand-holding
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Amanda Lukas
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... Sheila 14 April 2007

This is a beautiful day dream that's not too far out to come true! I hope it DOES come true for you. This is a lovely poem!

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Nimal Dunuhinga 30 March 2006

Daydreams come true Amanda; butterflies will bring you the good news one day in a summer daylight.................when you open your eyes you may see the reality.Really a gripping poem and thank you.

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Mike Finley 28 March 2006

Sweet, and then rueful. I liked the sweet better than the rueful!

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Amanda Lukas

Amanda Lukas

Ft. Lauderdale, FL
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