Daydreaming Comments
Fluffy white clouds way up high
a silver dart jets through the sky
reclining in my garden, lost in thought
I dream, I wonder what shores it sought
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Lovely imagery certainly a good write --10 anjali (do read mine Recession of love)
I am a rhythm and rhyme poet so I love to read rhymes. These are nicely done. The concept of the poem is simple but presented very well. I also like this classic structure for poems. GW62
Beautiful daydreaming of far away lands ends up to kiss home ground. Thematic imagery.......10/10. Regards Naseer
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9/3/2025 9:47:55 PM # 1.0.0
This is a lovely poem, makes me wish I was jetting off somewhere! !