Wednesday, October 29, 2008
Daydreaming Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Rough grass poking on my legs...
Prickly on my arms, too.
The sun slowly starts baking.
Swoosh!
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Ivan Ng1
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<font color = purple> April Breeland
01 November 2008
This gave me a relaxed feeling. WONDERFUL POEM!
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Alexandra Gray
01 November 2008
I felt so serene while reading this poem, you're a great poet. The last line was perfectly said, and how you called it as 'heaven'-vanishes as I awake-bringing us to reality again.
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7/20/2025 1:37:15 PM # 1.0.0
I like the way this poem has a relaxing theme. Something like mine called 'Sunlight's World'. Adeline