Monday, February 11, 2008

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where did you go off to again,
out the window towards
the wrinkling hills?
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Ben Partenay
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Steffi Webster 30 March 2009

I really like this poem Ben, it shows the great impact of man and how he casts the world into shadow under his growing presence as he crushes it beneath his iron boot. Well expressed and evocative xxx

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