Friday, February 10, 2012

Daydreamer Comments

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I am on the passenger side,
Daydreaming to the sky
The day's bright and full of life.. then
In a mile, I caught your sight
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John Hazon Palen
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Hardik Vaidya 15 March 2013

John Hazon Palen i loved your poem. you should have approached her buddy. just as two poems are never alike, two bus rides..... hey dont miss the next time please.

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Hardik Vaidya 15 March 2013

John Hazon Palen i loved your poem. you should have approached her buddy. just as two poems are never alike, two bus rides..... hey dont miss the next time please.

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John Hazon Palen 16 March 2012

Thank you, everyone! ; ') God bless! ! ! ! ! !

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Ency Bearis 16 March 2012

Nice poem to ponder, great write

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Jenna Chryste 15 March 2012

this happened to me yesterday except the person beside me woke me up :) i'm still a kid, yes, and am in high school - me and my daydreams :)

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Varna Soyokaze 15 March 2012

Very good poem. Reminds me of one of my experiences. The passenger's lucky enough to talk to someone who would write a poem on her.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 15 March 2012

Good poem, John; keep writing and sharing! You were lucky to find this co-passenger just as interested...

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Kody Pound 14 March 2012

That's a great Poem! You got talent kid.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 02 March 2012

beautiful poem, i really enjoy it)

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