Saturday, December 10, 2016

Daydream Comments

Rating: 3.8

Sunlight infusing green arbored stands

Pierced by the blue-fractured facets of sky.
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Seamus O' Brian
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Tom Billsborough 11 December 2016

This poem has a beautiful rhythm and the magical detail which infuses the best of Irish writing, Heany, Yeats and Joyce. For its rhythmic quality alone, it has to go in my favourites' list.

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Terry Craddock 10 December 2016

'Pierced by the blue-fractured facets of sky. Platinum gray, hang the Spanish moss strands In a summering breeze that whispers and sighs.' loved the tone and artistic beauty of this entire poem 10+++

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

Galway, Ireland
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