Saturday, February 18, 2006

Daydream Comments

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I am sitting under this shady tree
As the world revolves without me
No one dares to look at me
This shadow invisible under the tree
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Marie Joyce B. Negapatan
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Gina Onyemaechi 18 February 2006

Marie, I was going to write a poem about how lonely I felt when I was at university a few years ago. Trouble is, you've used the lines that I was going to use, so now it's not worth it.: -) Take a 10, my love, and take kindest regards as well. Warmly, Gina.

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Marie Joyce B. Negapatan

Marie Joyce B. Negapatan

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