Daydream
Why not have a very special dream
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'Places where everybody cares'........... What a wonderful world! Excellent.
'Devoutly to be wished'.- W. Shakespeare I find your daydream a charming one. Your repetitional use of 'A daydream' at the beginning of each stanza was very necessary here. I'm glad that's what you did. You also communicated well. Very nice! GW62
Very nice piece, lovely...