Thursday, June 12, 2008

Daydream Comments

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Daydream


Why not have a very special dream
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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 April 2009

Very nice piece, lovely...

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James B. Earley 25 June 2008

'Places where everybody cares'........... What a wonderful world! Excellent.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 12 June 2008

Day dream.............good poem I like d the whole poem

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Greenwolfe 1962 12 June 2008

'Devoutly to be wished'.- W. Shakespeare I find your daydream a charming one. Your repetitional use of 'A daydream' at the beginning of each stanza was very necessary here. I'm glad that's what you did. You also communicated well. Very nice! GW62

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