Wednesday, July 25, 2007

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Awkward silences, as I eye your lips,
wondering if a kiss would be taking this relationship,
to a place you wouldn't want it to be,
only wanting me as a friend,
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D'Angelo Lino
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Geoff Warden 26 July 2007

The emotions expressed in this poem are excellently written, takes the reader in and journeys the entire entrails well done

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Dipy Hermonite 26 July 2007

Very well expressed.Good work.

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Derrick Clark 25 July 2007

keep up the good work

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D'Angelo Lino

D'Angelo Lino

Panama City, Panama
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