Friday, September 14, 2018

Daybreak, Tofino Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sand is of doeskin, the mizzle is bright
for the sun is a lamp above sleepwalking mist,
and the land intermingles with dimness—the night
still lingers, asleep on the rainforest's chest,
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John Beaton
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Susan Williams 19 September 2018

The sand is of doeskin, - - - -] from the hills and the headlands that hammock the bay- - -]Each wave is an indigo ripple on slate / which advances, glissando, - - -]n frothing white crescents they scallop the strand..... Beautiful unique images - -what a glorious write! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++ on my fav list! ! !

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John Beaton 19 September 2018

Thanks very much, Susan. It's a joy to learn of others reading your poetry and liking it.

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