Tuesday, August 27, 2019

Daybreak Comments

Rating: 4.9

Daybreak
Wakey, wake.
Feet on the floor,
Slumber no more.
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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 September 2019

I can feel the sweetness and freshness of the morn in your lovely poem, dear Ma’am....10+++++

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Practicing Poetess 05 September 2019

Thank you very much, Bernard! : -)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 August 2019

Excellent write that captures the wonders and joys of.mornings. Very inspiring poem with great rhyme and imagery.

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Practicing Poetess 28 August 2019

Thank you once again, Rose Marie, for your encouraging comments! : -) Much appreciated!

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Sandra Feldman 27 August 2019

Your morning good cheer And, " Joie de vivre" Would even enthuse, A badly run tear. Beautifully done. Inspiring!

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Practicing Poetess 27 August 2019

Thank you, Sandra, for the wonderful compliment! :)

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