Daybreak Comments

I am in awe of how you expressed such a somber situatioin, so beautifuly... 'Your scent has since long left our pillows Yet I still bury my face within What my imagination will allow.' Through your words, I felt this. I felt the loss and the emptiness.

i likes how this was expressed.....a reaally good write i think (:

o so sad. sorry for your broken heart. Everyone goes through bad break ups. Great poem though

im sorry...about ur heartbreak...we all must go through it...good poem

Melancholy compressed: the daily struggle to rise after a difficult breakup...I know the feeling. Well expressed. Goldy