I stand, shoes sodden with the dew
And greet the first faint glow of light.
The sky fills with the spreading hue
Of day replacing night.
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Just beautiful Kevin - written from a tender heart, and with good rhyming, the descriptive phrases are well thought out. A ten. for this too from Fay.
Absolutely beautiful, it made the hairs on my arms stand up! Cannot believe this would not have a 10! ! ! it is perfect. HG: -) xx