Saturday, June 30, 2007

Day To Day Comments

Rating: 4.5

I close my eyes, breathe a deep sigh
And there in the darkness ….I see you and I
Dancing arm in arm
Gently gliding into hearts fire, far from harm
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Patricia Gale
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Not a member No 4 09 July 2007

Upbeat, romantic images of a dream to be realised Patricia. Very convincing indeed and very finely written. xx jim

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Geoff Warden 07 July 2007

A poetic version of Charllots web maybe.... very nice read from a romanic heart of giving.... I will always like the way you write these such poems very stuctured as well......nicly done

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