Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Day On Battlefield Comments

Rating: 3.5

It was a day on battlefield
Fierce battle was on and ground firmly held
'Not an inch of holy land must be occupied'
At any cost by enemy and must be repulsed
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Rick Adriolo 17 February 2012

What can I say? 10+ offcourse!

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Eric Cockrell 16 February 2012

war never brings a good result... we fight our very brothers and sisters over things that dont last, and dont matter... manipulated by the greed of the war machine... peace, at all costs!

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Thomas Fontenot 16 February 2012

True poetry, I cannot approach your level of writing, Superb!

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Unwritten Soul 16 February 2012

you was an army/serve for your country once so i know you can feel this very deep in heart...it's not easy day to go..so hope peace always stay in the air to stop any battle from rising over the world...it's a nice poem especially came from a person who serves energy to protect your country...keep it up_Unwritten Soul

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Silent Fingers 16 February 2012

enjoyed reading. very nice. thanks

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 February 2012

It was a day on battlefield Fierce battle was on and ground firmly held

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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