Day Off Comments

This is beautifully written, well done, Y P.

This poem is really good keep writing poems

This verse grabs the reader's attention from line one - - the expressive phrases are indeed well thought out - - keep writing do.....10 from Fay

I like this one a lot please keep writing u are very good

Preety good for a starter ur awesome keep riting

A DAYOFF which was depicted in a stylish writing, akin to a 'day of a lifetime'. Salamat po'.

great start i like this a laboror very good

A pretty nice poem for a start fine poetic pictorial illuminated....CT

this is so nice..if this will be fixed well, this is a perfect poem..grace