Saturday, June 17, 2017

Day Of The Fathers Comments

Rating: 4.2

D-ay of the fathers
A-llows the children to greet;
Y-es, let's love all dads who make both ends meet.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Cheryl Tutaan 19 June 2017

H-e works day and night; E-arly in the morning, he toils neath the sunlight. T-ill he breathes his last, H-e will never tire even once. So true... a perfect poem for all the bravest and a king for every childs heart...Thank you for sharing this marvelous poem, Bernard...a big 10+++++++

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Salamat, Ate Che..... big like👍

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Richard Wlodarski 18 June 2017

Your beautiful ode to fathers has put things in proper perspective. Thank you for guiding me to this poem, Bernard. Most definitely a 10!

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Thanks, Richard..... I will treasure your comments... a big like👍

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

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