Thursday, August 20, 2009

Day & Night Comments

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All day long, not a word-
but at night, I'm beginning to learn...
When I push you away in the light-
the closer you come in the night.
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Brooke Peterson
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Sanober Khan 20 October 2009

lovely....loved your phrasing and your emotions flow beautifully, you are a good poet..i really like your work

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Katie Bradley 05 September 2009

I can relate to this..

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