Friday, June 23, 2006

Day In The Life Comments

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Shell-shocked,
moths flurrying through
open mind and open soul
(reluctantly opened arms)
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Ballerina With Fins
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Brian Dorn 23 June 2006

Wow, really vivid images and soft expressions of emotion. Very creative and cleverly done! Brian

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Sonny Rainshine 23 June 2006

Very intriguing, somewhat mysterious poem. Very good image of a cloth absorbing water until it becomes heavy and 'drowns.' And the lead-in to the wateriness of tears is inspired. Good work.

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