Day In The Life Of A Melted Plastic Soldier Comments

This is whimsical and fun (I may be simple minded; but I do my best LOL) . It's intriguing to read comments from one young genius about another young genius' poem! Cause then I have to go check out the other poem..and get into this endless loop thingy. But it's really engrossing. (smile) Maybe I hoping some of the amazement will rub off on me by association!

'expose my sunflower iris's to solemn forms— as transcendental yet as microscopic as myself— wondering if realization is truly universal with my sunflower iris's and solemn forms' I find these lines interesting, and incredible. Merci beaucoup de nous partager Kale, c'etait magnifique. H&K's Jess**

are u really 19 years old? Your writing is as if you have been through all stages of a poet's writing to maturity. I am sincerely impressed and amazed! ! ! I'll be watching you :)

searching for the smaller world with my pretty face and the green grass But it is so large, is it not? The way these small things affect us so... Great poem! Favorite! By the way, I love the last stanza: 'The sun snarls at my back'