Monday, March 25, 2013

Day In The Life Of A Bee Comments

Rating: 4.0

I first landed on a fuchsia
Drank my fill, then landed on
A blade of fresh summer grass
Warmed by the morning sun.
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David Wood
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Indira Babbellapati 21 May 2013

I travelled with the bee till the last!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 April 2013

Sir the concluding lines, its the effective one beautifully wrote, poem sways like flowers with breeze, words are pearly bees the organised creature, breeze the coolant, thank you sir enjoy reading.I love to read, When I read I make a picture in my mind, A canvas I am for my thought'

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