Saturday, November 14, 2015

Day In Day Out....... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sun, nonchalantly, makes
plants grow, buds open
flowers bloom, fruits ripe,
zephyrs twirl, rain-bows glow
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Hans Vr 11 December 2015

Beautiful poem and reflection.

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Souren Mondal 01 December 2015

Nature is always sweet to look at and enjoy, and even to pen down poems on.. Thank you for sharing Jayatissa. It's a lovely poem :)

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 01 December 2015

Thank you Souren for your encouraging comment.

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Valsa George 15 November 2015

I am so happy that my poem November Morning has inspired you to write this lovely poem on all that happens in Nature in day light and how they are made immortal by poets! A 10

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Kelly Kurt 14 November 2015

Valsa's poems can be inspiring. Very nicely done, Jayatissa

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Shakil Ahmed 14 November 2015

you have painted the activities of sun in poetic language, with beautiful words and images, thanks for sharing, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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