Saturday, August 9, 2008

Day Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Memories of spent days
have risen
like the bird Phoenix
from the cinnamon ashes of my past…
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Bharat Trivedi
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Adeline Foster 29 August 2008

Very good. I like the trick ending. Adeline

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Anjali Sinha 19 August 2008

hey a beautiful climax to that heady and sensous delights. 'Together, we chase the seven-horsed chariot, feeling weary I droop to deep sleep, and wake up to realise, it was only a day dream…' great write bharat +10 regards anjali

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