Tuesday, January 13, 2009

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i am on a journey to where i dont know
as i start this journey dont know were to go
to start the journey i take one step
dont look back try to forget
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John Mccudden
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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 20 November 2017

Beautiful poem. I hope that you don't come back to reality to give more of such well thought poems.

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Maria Keith 13 January 2009

I like the poem it is very good reminds me of my own life some times i feel traped hope you can take the time to check out my poems and let me know what you think im alittle amiture its sad to say but i would like to hear your oppion thanks

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Fiona Davidson 13 January 2009

Beafitul journey it is too...lovely poem...thanks for posting...

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