Tuesday, July 8, 2008

Day Dreamer Comments

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I'v offten sat and dreamed,
What it would be like to be
That bird flying in the clouds
High in the jewl blue sky above us.
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Pirate Love Magic Man
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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 20 November 2017

Thanks with such dreams. I hope that you soon have a family and home. Great artwork.

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*Trusting You* 26 December 2008

Now I dream what it would be like To have a family and a home. ya me too. this is a really great poem. I really like it. great job. Purkey Girl

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Michael Gale 10 December 2008

Great poem! I heard that squirrels are nutz. Is that true? Nyuk! Nyuk! Nyuk! Coiytenly. God bless all poets-MJG.

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premji premji 04 December 2008

dream dream and dreammm squeze poetry out...

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Patricia Gale 26 November 2008

Home, family and love... wonderful dreams. Lovely sentiments.

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I really liked that poem... i can relate.

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this is such a sweet poem. ur a great writer. xoxox

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Mark Nwagwu 13 July 2008

yes, yours is a fantastic dream, for it is one you can make come true - the birds, the squirrels, the rabbits, the turtles, don't send their dreams to poemhunter, but you, One 4you, do and this one - family and home - is especially the One 4you.

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anonymous 12 July 2008

This is a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing. =)

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DELETED NOW 11 July 2008

thanks for sharing I wonder that sometimes too

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Rani Turton 09 July 2008

I liked this poem a lot, the finals lines are really very touching. Thanks.

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hmm i wonder what it would be like to have a family and a home also, good job

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Serenity Prayer 08 July 2008

those last two lines just break my heart. great job though.

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(: God's Wild Child :) 08 July 2008

i like it, good job. keep it up. =)

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